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2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: Talk about two cities you would like to visit. I want to visit New York. Because, there are lots of building. So, I have a lots of thing like baseballgame,movie. I like LonDon. These city show Kingdom's traditional. And,I love Tower Briges and Big Ben. And KingDom's food is delicious. So, I like London.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]!

I hope you could visit these two beautiful cities someday. Like what you said, there are many things that you can enjoy in those places.

Anyway, have a great day!

~t. Kelly^^

Essay: Talk about two cities you would like to visit.
I want to visit New York.

>> Correct.
Because, there are lots of building.

>> Because there are lots of buildings there. 
So, I have a lots of thing like baseballgame,movie.

>> And, there are lots things I can do like playing baseball games and watching movies.
I like LonDon.
>> I like London.

>> I also like to go to London.
These city show Kingdom\'s traditional.
>> In this city, there is a show about the United Kingdom\'s tradition.
And,I love Tower Briges and Big Ben.
>>
And, I love Tower Bridges and Big Ben.
And KingDom\'s food is delicious.

>> And the food in the United Kingdom is delicious.
So, I like London.

>> Correct.

>> So, I like to visit London.

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