homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
You are really a superwoman! I salute you for being a good and responsible mother.
I hope you can find time to rest and relax as well. Take care of yourself.^^
~Kelly^^
If you could stop time, what would you do and why?
===If i could stop time.. . . . I will be able to sleep.
>> If I could stop time, I would like to sleep.
Because,i do not have time to sleep
>> Because, I do not have time to sleep.
I have to work always.
>> Correct.
I do a laundry,wipe the floor,do the dishes,ate and i go to work,takeing care of my kids.
>> I do the laundry, wipe the floor, do the dishes, go to work and take care of my kids.
I want to sleepy.
>> I want to sleep.
>> I feel sleepy.
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