homework
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Talk about two cities you would like to visit.
I would like to visit in Busan and Seoul.
There are something to eat,something to see,something to active.
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Hi there, Ma\'am Sylvia!^^
Thank you for sharing the two cities you would like to visit. I hope you can go there with your family. Have fun!
~Kelly^^
Talk about two cities you would like to visit.
>> Correct.
I would like to visit in Busan and Seoul.
>> I would like to visit Busan and Seoul City.
There are something to eat,something to see,something to active.
>> Did you mean: There are so many things that I can enjoy there like eating, sightseeing and doing many other fun activities.
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