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2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5/31 Does speaking English well make you more intelligent than a friend who cannot speak English at all? Yes, I do. I think speaking English is a kind of talents and also other languages too. If I can dance or play sports well, I can have strong self-esteem. I think it is the same thing. People more admire the people who can speak other languages because it is hard to do it and it has strong power which is communicating to others.

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Does speaking English well make you more intelligent than a friend who cannot speak English at all?

Yes, I do.

>>> Yes, it does.

I think speaking English is a kind of talents and also other languages too.

>>> I think speaking English and other languages is a kind of talent.

If I can dance or play sports well, I can have strong self-esteem.

>>> Correct!

I think it is the same thing.

>>> Correct!

People more admire the people who can speak other languages because it is hard to do it and it has strong power which is communicating to others.

>>> People more admire those who can speak other languages because it is hard to do and it enables people to easily communicate with others.

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