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2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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6/1 How could a learner's environment affect the learning process? It is very important for the learners to be in a proper environment. The enviroment which forces us to do what we should do. For example, learing English in Korea is difficult it is because people in Korea don't need to speak English. However, learning English in the Philippines is easy and motivate us to learn because everyone speaks English and it is easier to live when we speak English.

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In other words, you agree that the environment affects the learning process, right Miss [이름]? C\") Thanks for your opinions! See you later.


~Teacher Shanee^^,


How could a learner\'s environment affect the learning process?

It is very important for the learners to be in a proper environment.

>>> Correct!
 The enviroment which forces us to do what we should do.

>>> In an environment which forces us to do what we should do.
 For example, learing English in Korea is difficult it is because people in Korea don\'t need to speak English.

>>> For example, learning English in Korea is difficult because people in my country don\'t need to speak English.

However, learning English in the Philippines is easy and motivate us to learn because everyone speaks English and it is easier to live when we speak English.

>>> However, learning English in the Philippines is easy and motivating because everyone speak English and it is easier to live there if we can speak the language.

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