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2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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6/12 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Why? I prefer to travel with a companion. I realized that there should be someone when I saw good views and also I had difficult situations. I could solve the problems with her or him and I could share what we have seen. But I know that sometimes traveling alone makes me think so it depends on situations. However, if it is a trip, I rather to be with some body I like.

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Traveling alone enables you to discover your true self and how much you are capable of. I want to experience it some day.^^

~Teaher Shannee^^,

6/12 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Why?

I prefer to travel with a companion.

>>> Correct!

I realized that there should be someone when I saw good views and also I had difficult situations.

>>> I realized that it\'s good to see good views with someone and to have someone by your side when you experience difficult situations.
I could solve the problems with her or him and I could share what we have seen.

>>> Correct!

But I know that sometimes traveling alone makes me think so it depends on situations.

>>> But I know that sometimes traveling alone enables me to think more so it depends on the situation.

However, if it is a trip, I rather to be with some body I like.

>>> However, if it is a trip, I rather be with someone I like.

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