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2017-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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6/15 Does motivation come from inside a person or from their environment? Explain why you think so. I think both of them can motivate the person. Sometimes I am motivated by teachers, friends, family and so on but sometimes the enviroment motivated me to do it. It really forces me to do.

강사 첨삭

I agree with you Miss [이름]!

Motivation comes from within an individual but it can also

be influenced by the environment.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

6/15 Does motivation come from inside a person or from their environment? Explain why you think so.

I think both of them can motivate the person.

>>> Correct! [a person]

Sometimes I am motivated by teachers, friends, family and so on but sometimes the enviroment motivated me to do it.

>>> Sometimes I am motivated by my teachers, friends, family and so on but sometimes I am motivated by the environment to do something.

It really forces me to do.

>>> OR: It really encourages me to accomplish something.

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