HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Just like you, I also have a lot of favorite songs but I cannot remember their titles. Perhaps, it\'s the age. Haha! Talk to you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
6/21 Write an essay about the song that you like best. Include why you like that song.
I cannot say the exact songs\' titles it is changed by my feelings but I enjoy the old songs when I was teenager.
>>> I cannot exactly say the songs\' titles. It depends on how I feel. I enjoyed listening to old songs when I was a teenager.
The songs bring lots of memories to me while I was listening them.
>>> The songs brought back lots of memories to me while I was listening to them.
So I try to find the song that I want to remember that time.
>>> So I try to find a song that makes me remember some old memories.
Music is magic.
>>> Correct!
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