HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for describing your house to me Miss [이름]!
It sounds a good place. Expect me to visit your house when I go to Korea. Haha! See you later.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
7/1 How would you describe your house to someone who has never visited there before?
My house is located on 6th floor in the building.
>>> My house is located on the sixth floor of our building.
When you enter the doors, you can the white fence.
>>> When you enter the door, you can see the white fence.
Don\'t be surprised.
>>> Correct!
Just open the door and come on in.
>>> Correct!
There are a big room with a bathroom and two small rooms.
>>> There are three rooms: one big room with a bathroom and two small rooms.
The one with bathroom is where I s[이름]p.
>>> The one with a bathroom is where I s[이름]p.
I am using two small rooms as the dress room.
>>> We are using the two small rooms as our dress rooms.
One for my roommate. Another is for me.
>>> One is for my roommate and the other one is for me.
There is a living room where my roommate s[이름]p with 6 puupies.
>>> There is a living room where my roommate s[이름]ps with her puppies.
Beside the living room, you can see a kitchin.
>>> Beside the living room, you can see the kitchen.
In front of the kitchin, there is a door to the terrace.
>>> Correct! [kitchen]
There is a small swimming pool which I can swim with puppies and a small garden which has beautiful flowers.
>>> Outside the house, there is a small swimming pool where I can swim with the puppies and a small garden where beautiful grows.
If you have time and you are not afraid of puppies, please visit my house.^^
>>> Correct!
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