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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7/1 How would you describe your house to someone who has never visited there before? My house is located on 6th floor in the building. When you enter the doors, you can the white fence. Don't be surprised. Just open the door and come on in. There are a big room with a bathroom and two small rooms. The one with bathroom is where I s[이름]p. I am using two small rooms as the dress room. One for my roommate. Another is for me. There is a living room where my roommate s[이름]p with 6 puupies. Beside the living room, you can see a kitchin. In front of the kitchin, there is a door to the terrace. There is a small swimming pool which I can swim with puppies and a small garden which has beautiful flowers. If you have time and you are not afraid of puppies, please visit my house.^^

강사 첨삭

Thanks for describing your house to me Miss [이름]!

It sounds a good place. Expect me to visit your house when I go to Korea. Haha! See you later.


~Teacher Shanee^^,


7/1 How would you describe your house to someone who has never visited there before?

My house is located on 6th floor in the building.

>>> My house is located on the sixth floor of our building.
When you enter the doors, you can the white fence.

>>> When you enter the door, you can see the white fence.

Don\'t be surprised. 

>>> Correct! 
Just open the door and come on in.

>>> Correct!

There are a big room with a bathroom and two small rooms.

>>> There are three rooms: one big room with a bathroom and two small rooms.

The one with bathroom is where I s[이름]p.

>>> The one with a bathroom is where I s[이름]p.

I am using two small rooms as the dress room.

>>> We are using the two small rooms as our dress rooms.

One for my roommate. Another is for me. 

>>> One is for my roommate and the other one is for me.
 There is a living room where my roommate s[이름]p with 6 puupies.

>>> There is a living room where my roommate s[이름]ps with her puppies.

Beside the living room, you can see a kitchin.

>>> Beside the living room, you can see the kitchen.

In front of the kitchin, there is a door to the terrace.

>>> Correct! [kitchen]

There is a small swimming pool which I can swim with puppies and a small garden which has beautiful flowers.

>>> Outside the house, there is a small swimming pool where I can swim with the puppies and a small garden where beautiful grows.

If you have time and you are not afraid of puppies, please visit my house.^^

>>> Correct!

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