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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7/7 What law in your country would you like to change? Why? I want to change the law about deciding years in prison. If people have a mental disease, the judge doesn't decide long years in prison to the prisoners. It is unfair to do it. I want to change to give the prisoners long years in prison even though they killed somebody.

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Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts regarding this matter.

Talk to you later Miss [이름]!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

7/7 What law in your country would you like to change? Why?

I want to change the law about deciding years in prison.

>>> Correct!
If people have a mental disease, the judge doesn\'t decide long years in prison to the prisoners.

>>> If people have a mental disease, the judge doesn\'t sentence the prisoners to long time imprisonment.

It is unfair to do it.

>>> It is not a fair judgment.
I want to change to give the prisoners long years in prison even though they killed somebody.

>>> I want the punishment for heinous criminals to be heavier.

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