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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7/10 Thanks for checking my homework..*^^* And I am sorry for taking your time because of my homework. I will try to do my homework on time.*^^* I am so thankful to you to be my teacher. http://tv.naver.com/v/1841966 This link is that I told you about the song. I hope that you also like this.^^ And one more...ㅜㅜ I don't understand about today's homework. I need your explanation so that I can do this homework... I am really sorry that I cannot do this... See you tomorrow~~*^^*

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much for sending this link Miss [이름]!

I am going to open it later.

Anyway, it\'s my pleasure to check your homework. I always appreciate your effort. I know that you are always busy but you still manage to accomplish the homework that I give you.

As for the homework that I gave you yesterday, you have to simplify the sentences. Revise them to state their meaning in fewer words.

Here is another example:

He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.

Answer: He dropped out of school to support his family.

I will explain it further later in class.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,



7/10 Thanks for checking my homework..*^^*
And I am sorry for taking your time because of my homework.

 I will try to do my homework on time.*^^*
I am so thankful to you to be my teacher.

>>> I am so thankful to you for being a good teacher to me.


 http://tv.naver.com/v/1841966
This link is that I told you about the song.

>>> This is the link to the song I was telling you yesterday.
 I hope that you also like this.^^

>>> I hope that you would also like this.^^


 And one more...ㅜㅜ I don\'t understand about today\'s homework.
I need your explanation so that I can do this homework...
I am really sorry that I cannot do this...
See you tomorrow~~*^^*

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