homework

2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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2. He quit school to support his family. 3. The bus company will announce new schedules soon. 4. If students are interested in foreign students they know them. 5. Most people had told a deliberate lie. 6. People cause trouble when they disobey rules.

강사 첨삭

Great job [이름]!

I know you tried your best to answer this homework.

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

2. He quit school to support his family.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: He dropped out of school to support his family.
3. The bus company will announce new schedules soon.

>>> The bus company will probably announce its schedule during the next few days.
4. If students are interested in foreign students they know them.

>>> Any student who wants to meet foreign students can do so in many ways.
5. Most people had told a deliberate lie.

>>> OR: Rarely will you find someone who has never told a deliberate lie.
6. People cause trouble when they disobey rules.

>>> Disobeying safety regulations causes trouble.

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