homework
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How does rain change your feelings? When can rain be dangerous?
Yes. rain change my feelings to angry. because if ranning rain, i feel uncomfortable. It is dangerous when it rains too much and the city is flooded.
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Yes. rain change my feelings to angry.
>> Yes, rain makes me feel angry.
because if ranning rain, i feel uncomfortable.
>> It\'s because I feel uncomfortable when it\'s raining.
It is dangerous when it rains too much and the city is flooded.
>> It is dangerous when it rains too much for the city will be flooded.
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