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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Which would you pick: being a world-class athlete (with a plethora of gold medals, awards, etc.) or a genius who is famous for inventing something? I would like to be a world-class athlete. Because I am not good at exercise and sports,I always envy famous world-class athletes. I respect that they surpass the limit of their physical ability. I wonder how I feel if I surpass the limit of my physical ability.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Grace!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I feel the same way!

I would love to be a world-class athlete too, particularly a swimmer or a basketball player!

How about you?

Check my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

I would like to be a world-class athlete.

>> CORRECT!
Because I am not good at exercise and sports,I always envy famous world-class athletes.

>> Because I\'m not good at exercising and doing sports, I always envy famous world-class athletes.
I respect that they surpass the limit of their physical ability.

>> I respect them for surpassing the limits of their physical abilities.
I wonder how I feel if I surpass the limit of my physical ability.

>> I wonder how I would feel if I can surpass the limits of my physical abilities.

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