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2017-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gem

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In the korea, most of a people attend an university for making career. Major company and minor company have big salary gab. Therefore, to enter major company, many people attend an university as well as studying foreign luanguage. Universities is not place any more where students just research something .

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Hello Logan! ^^


Good job in answering yesterday\'s composition topic.

Notice that in writing in English, you explain more and complete your sentences.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==


In the korea, most of a people attend an university for making career. Major company and minor company have big salary gab. Therefore, to enter major company, many people attend an university as well as studying foreign luanguage. Universities is not place any more where students just research something .

>> People attend college or university for many different reasons but in Korea most people attend university to be able to have a career. There is a big difference between the salaries of working in a major company and working in a minor company so people nowadays aim to work for a major company. To be able to do that, they have to go to university as well as study a foreign language.

Universities are not places to just study and research anymore but to start planning your future career. 

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