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Hello again, Grace!
That doll does sound cute!
I didn\'t play with a lot of dolls when I was young.
I mostly played games outside with my brothers and my neighbors.
We loved playing tag and hide and seek.
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Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
When I was a child, I liked a baby doll that was for hospital play.
>> When I was a child, I liked a baby doll that was used for hospital role play.
There were holes on baby doll\'s arm and its eyes.
>> There were holes on the baby doll\'s arms and eyes.
If I gave an injection with syringe having water on the doll\'s arm, then it cried as the water came out the doll\'s eyes.
>> When I injected its arm with a syringe with water, it would cry and water would come out of its eyes.
It was really cute.
>> CORRECT!
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