Homework

2017-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gem

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Choose one (1) question/topic and answer/explain in not more than four (4) sentences. 1. What three adjectives best describe artificial intelligence? 2. Do you think it’s possible that one day, many people will live on Mars? 3. How different would the world be without medicine? ================================================================== 3. How different would the world be without medicine? If there is no medicine, the world might be different. More people would die and more people would be sick. But the world might be better because there are not the side effects of the antibiotics. Thank you for teaching me~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.

Actually, I think the world would be a better place without these synthetic medicines.
We can use herbs to treat diseases. We have oriental methods such as acupuncture.
Synthetic medicines contain harmful chemicals.

Have a good night, too!
_T. Mayleen ^.^

3. How different would the world be without medicine?
If there is no medicine, the world might be different.
>> CORRECT!
More people would die and more people would be sick.
>> CORRECT!
But the world might be better because there are not the side effects of the antibiotics.
>> But the world might be better because there would be no side effects nor complications.
Thank you for teaching me~!!^^
>> CORRECT!

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