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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. You performed really well in class and you did your homework well too.
If you have free time, you can also review some of the alternative answers below.
Thank you again. You are such a good kid.
Have a lovely day! ((: :))
Teacher Amanda:)
1. My Favorite food is rice cake. It is very sweet.
CORRECT
2. My favorite food is pork. It gives me a lot of energy.
CORRECT
3. My favorite food is chicken. When I bite chicken it is so tasty.
>> My favorite food is fried chicken. When I bite into it, it is so tasty.
OR you can also write the sentences above in just two sentences.
>>My favorite foods are rice cake, pork and chicken. I like rice cake because its very sweet,
pork gives me a lot of energy and fried chicken is just so tasty.
4. There are three parks in our town.
CORRECT
5. Most fridges are bigger than me.
CORRECT
6. Her face is so beautiful.
CORRECT
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