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2017-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Dear [Name]! To start with, I really appreciate your sincere teaching. I can actually perceive that my English composition ability has been much improved by your strict corrections. I have learned a lot from your different but more exact and proper expressions. Given the fact that I had not used English for almost 10 years before the lesson, it must be a remarkable advance for me. Now that about a year has passed since I took the lesson, however, we need to discuss something about how to improve my conversation skill. To tell the truth, during the lesson I might have been reading, not talking in English. Free talking was always so hard for me that I had to write and write what I would talk about to keep going on our conversation. It took me a long time to prepare for our lesson. The wrong habit surely delayed improving my conversation skill. Therefore, I ardently desire that our lesson be focused on the prompt conversation. During the free talking time, you may ask me questions as many

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Sir [이름]^^

Before anything else let me thank you for everything :)

I feel honored and blessed to have known you, your family, and Rookie^^

On the other hand, spontaneous conversation indeed improves our skill.

I will do my best to ask questions in order to facilitate a natural discussion.

Thanks for your suggestion, Sir. See you!

Dear [Name]!

>>Dear [Name],
 To start with, I really appreciate your sincere teaching.

>>CORRECT!
 I can actually perceive that my English composition ability has been much improved by your strict corrections.

>>CORRECT!
 I have learned a lot from your different but more exact and proper expressions.

>>CORRECT!
 Given the fact that I had not used English for almost 10 years before the lesson, it must be a remarkable advance for me.

>>CORRECT!
 Now that about a year has passed since I took the lesson, however, we need to discuss something about how to improve my conversation skill.

>>CORRECT!
 To tell the truth, during the lesson I might have been reading, not talking in English.

>>CORRECT!
 Free talking was always so hard for me that I had to write and write what I would talk about to keep going on our conversation.

>>Free talking was always so hard for me that I had to write and write what I would talk about to keep our conversation going.
 It took me a long time to prepare for our lesson.

>>CORRECT!
 The wrong habit surely delayed improving my conversation skill.

>> The wrong habit surely delayed the improvement of my conversation skill.
 Therefore, I ardently desire that our lesson be focused on the prompt conversation.

>> Therefore, I ardently desire that our lesson be focused on prompt conversation.
 During the free talking time, you may ask me questions as many

>> During the free talking time, you may ask me as many questions as you can. ^^

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