HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Sir [이름]^^
Before anything else let me thank you for everything :)
I feel honored and blessed to have known you, your family, and Rookie^^
On the other hand, spontaneous conversation indeed improves our skill.
I will do my best to ask questions in order to facilitate a natural discussion.
Thanks for your suggestion, Sir. See you!
Dear [Name]!
>>Dear [Name],
To start with, I really appreciate your sincere teaching.
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I can actually perceive that my English composition ability has been much improved by your strict corrections.
>>CORRECT!
I have learned a lot from your different but more exact and proper expressions.
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Given the fact that I had not used English for almost 10 years before the lesson, it must be a remarkable advance for me.
>>CORRECT!
Now that about a year has passed since I took the lesson, however, we need to discuss something about how to improve my conversation skill.
>>CORRECT!
To tell the truth, during the lesson I might have been reading, not talking in English.
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Free talking was always so hard for me that I had to write and write what I would talk about to keep going on our conversation.
>>Free talking was always so hard for me that I had to write and write what I would talk about to keep our conversation going.
It took me a long time to prepare for our lesson.
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The wrong habit surely delayed improving my conversation skill.
>> The wrong habit surely delayed the improvement of my conversation skill.
Therefore, I ardently desire that our lesson be focused on the prompt conversation.
>> Therefore, I ardently desire that our lesson be focused on prompt conversation.
During the free talking time, you may ask me questions as many
>> During the free talking time, you may ask me as many questions as you can. ^^
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