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I think people will communicate online or texting.
>>> I think people will be communicating online or through texting.
I don\'t think they will communicate face-to-face that much in future because technology have improved over years and we have less time to meet other people and talk with them.
>>> I don\'t think they will communicate face-to-face that much because technology has improved over years and we have less time to meet other people and talk with them.
I\'m afraid that one day we might not even think about human relationships when we have technology to do things for us.
>>> Correct!
I think there will be less time to communicate directly, but communicate with technology.
>>> I think people will have less time to communicate directly but much time to communicate through technology.
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