Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What period of history would you like to go back and live in?
Answer in not more than five (5) sentences.
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I would like to go back to the Joseon Dynasty period.
I want to meet King Sejong and make Hangul with him.
I want to wear Hanbok, korean traditional clothes and play Neolttwigi, a korean seesaw.
Have a good night~!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jason!^_^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Your composition is interesting and I\'ve read it well.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow. :)
See you then!^^
_T. Mayleen ^.^
I would like to go back to the Joseon Dynasty period.
>> CORRECT!
I want to meet King Sejong and make Hangul with him.
>> I would like to meet King Sejong and make Hangul with him.
I want to wear Hanbok, korean traditional clothes and play Neolttwigi, a korean seesaw.
>> I would wear Hanbok, a Korean traditional dress, and play Neolttwigi, Korean traditional seesaw.
Have a good night~!
>> CORRECT!
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