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Hurrah!
I hope you can really go home early. Your daughter would be very happy.
Thanks for sharing, James! You slept pretty late again.
Take good care of yourself and please send my regards to family.
ENJOY!
-Klein-
If you were to pull someone\'s leg today, who\'s the lucky person?
What exactly are you planning on doing?
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As you know, my daughter always asks me when I will come back home tomorrow.
>>Correct
So I will answer like that I will be late tomorrow because of work about my daughter\'s question.
>>So I will answer that I will be late tomorrow because of work to my daughter\'s question.
When I say l am late, she always disappoints but she says OK.
>>When I say I will be late, she is always disappointed but she says, \"OK\".
Tomorrow, it\'s TGIF and there isn\'t a seneior colleague more than me in our office.
>>Tomorrow, it\'s TGIF and there isn\'t any other senior colleagues in our office.
So I convince that I will go home early and I will make a surprise my daughter.
>>So I am convinced that I will go home early and surprise my daughter.
I will eat dinner with my family and enjoy our Friday with them.
>>I will eat dinner with my family and enjoy my Friday with them.
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