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2017-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: What would you do if you knew aliens would attack Earth tomorrow? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. -------------------------------------------------------------------- I would tell everyone the fact that aliens would attack Earth tomorrow. I would be with my family in case something bad happened. I would watch TV or listen to the radio because I could know the information about aliens. Have a happy weekend~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^_^)

A happy Friday to you!


Thank you very much for accomplishing your homework.

You did a very good job.^^Keep doing your best and explore more ways to express yourself better.

I will see you again on Monday!

Have a good night and enjoy your weekend! :)


_T. Mayleen ^.^


I would tell everyone the fact that aliens would attack Earth tomorrow.

>> CORRECT!
I would be with my family in case something bad happened.

>> I would be with my family in case something bad happens.

OR: I would stay with my family in case something bad happens.

I would watch TV or listen to the radio because I could know the information about aliens.

>> CORRECT!


Have a happy weekend~!!^^

>> CORRECT!

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