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2017-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Choose one (1) question/topic and answer/explain in not more than four (4) sentences. 3. How different would the world be without medicine? If we don't have medicind, We can't care the disease. So there will be a lot of people dying.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! ^_^)/

Happy Friday!


Thank you so much for answering your homework.

At least you gave two sentences instead of just words or phrases.

I will see you again on Monday.

Have a fun and safe weekend!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


3. How different would the world be without medicine?


If we don\'t have medicind, We can\'t care the disease.

>> If we don\'t have medicines, we can\'t treat diseases.


So there will be a lot of people dying.

>> So more people will die.

OR: More and more people will pass away.



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