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2017-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When was the last time you pulled punches? ==> When I work with my colleague, there are many persons who have different working style. Some of them, they work very well, but some persons do not good at work. When the person who he does not work very well, make a document and report to me about their work, I can find some mistakes easily. At that time I have to pull punches because if I scold him, maybe he will be disappointed very much about his work and he will loose his passion about working. It is very difficult to endure that I scold him about his work, especially the person who works for a long time at this company. I hope that he finds some solutions when he works in the company, and he will make a good result through his work. Anyway I am trying to make an effort to guide someone who has low performance, and he will be a good worker in the company.

강사 첨삭

You are very passionate about your job, James!

I hope that your wishes would soon materialize. Sometimes, even how hard we try to help others, they are simply unteachable. Let us just hope that is not the case for your coworkers.

Extend your patience, my friend!

And of course, take it easy there.

Enjoy your week!

-Klein-

When was the last time you pulled punches?
 ==>
When I work with my colleague, there are many persons who have different working style.
>>When I work with my colleague, there are many persons who have a different working style. 

Some of them, they work very well, but some persons do not good at work.
>>Some of them work well, but some persons are not good at work.

When the person who he does not work very well, make a document and report to me about their work, I can find some mistakes easily.
>>When the person does not work very well, makes a document and reports to me about his work, I can find some mistakes easily.

At that time I have to pull punches because if I scold him, maybe he will be disappointed very much about his work and he will loose his passion about working.
>>At that time, I have to pull punches because if I scold at him, maybe he will be very disappointed about his work and lose his passion for it.

It is very difficult to endure that I scold him about his work, especially the person who works for a long time at this company.
>>It is very difficult to endure scolding at him about his work, especially that he has been working for a long time in this company. 

I hope that he finds some solutions when he works in the company, and he will make a good result through his work.
>>Correct

Anyway I am trying to make an effort to guide someone who has low performance, and he will be a good worker in the company.

>>Correct! 

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