Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Fascinating Monday evening to you! ^^

Taking risks can be really scary sometimes. But I think this 

is the only way for you to know your full potential. :)

Your experience there in AU is amazing. It made you a better and different person. :)

Please check on my corrections and the proper way for writing. THank you. 

See you!

Teacher Glenda    

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Some people like to do only what they already do
well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks.
Which do you prefer?


In my case is the latte one .

>> In my case, it\'s the latter one.

i would like to try new things and something like that

>> I would like to try new things.
 It`s scary to try something new but if you want to change your life a little , you have to divert your thoughts . 

>> Correct

   when i was in korea , i was always afraid of change so i didn`t do anything 

>> When I was in Korea, I was always afraid of change, so I didn\'t do anything new.
 However i`ve changed since i got here when i finish my visa and go back to korea , i`ll try some thing new !!

>>  However  I`ve changed since I got here. When I finish my visa and I will go back to Korea, I`ll try some thing new !!