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Hello there [이름]!

I just want you to know that you did an excellent job for this essay.

Two thumbs up for you! ^^

I think you\'ve really placed a lot of effort in writing it.

I admire you so much.

I agree that apologizing is a brave act and not everyone can actually do it.

Most people interpret it as a sign of weakness but in truth, it is the other way around.

It requires a lot of courage to admit that you are wrong.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great time with your friends.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

Take care always.

~Teacher Charry :)

Apologizing is not a sign of weakness.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When you apologize, it does not mean that you are weak.

In fact, it shows the person\'s sincerity and strength.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> As a matter of fact, it actually shows a person\'s sincerity and strength.

Because to make an apology, people should face their own wrong doings and admit what they did wrong.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is because making an apology requires people to face their own wrong doings and admit what they did something wrong.

This process is not a peasant thing at all so many people simply choose avoiding it.

>> This process is not a pleasant thing at all so many people simply choose avoiding it.

The reason why some apologies can be read as a sign of weakness is they are made in wrong way.

>> The reason why some apologies can be read as a sign of weakness is that they are made in a wrong way.

If someone says sorry to just avoid an uncomfortable situation, other people can sense the apology is not sincere.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If someone says sorry just to avoid an uncomfortable situation, other people interpret it as an insincere apology.

This makes people think the person who made a fake apology is not a reliable one.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This makes people think that the person who made a fake apology is not a reliable one.

If same things happen repeatedly, no one will give much credit on his/her words anymore.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> No one will give much credit on his/her words anymore if things would repeatedly happen.

However this is the result of apologies made in inappropriate way.

>> However, this is the result of apologies made in an inappropriate way.

Apologizing itself doesn\'t make the person be small or weak.

>> Apologizing itself doesn\'t make the person small or weak.