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That makes a whole lot of sense!
I am happy that you live an honest life. Some people say that it can be tough but it is a matter of perspective.
Thanks for sharing, James!
I really thing I can ask you all sorts of questions because you are very open.
I hope your values will be passed on to more people, especially to your children.
I am deeply moved by every answer you share in your compositions.
Keep it up!
Have a wonderful day, James.
-Klein-
How do you feel about people pulling a fast one?
How do you deal with them?
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If I am deceived something from someone, maybe I cannot endure it.
>>If I am deceived by something from someone, maybe I cannot endure it.
I believe that I lived honestly during my life.
>>Correct
So it is not unbelievable and terrible thing to me.
>>So it is not an unbelievable and terrible thing to me.
At first, I will analyse why I cheated something from another person.
>>At first, I will analyze why I was cheated by another person.
And then, I will prepare some method that I am never cheated from swindler.
>>And then, I will prepare some methods, so I will never be cheated by another swindler.
And the person who cheated me, I should find him and I ask him to compensate about my mental and physical damage.
>>Correct
Anyway, I believe that people should live honestly.
>>Correct
People who pull a fast someone has to be punished about his action.
>>People who pull a fast one have to be punished for their action.
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