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2017-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you feel about people pulling a fast one? How do you deal with them? ==> If I am deceived something from someone, maybe I cannot endure it. I believe that I lived honestly during my life. So it is not unbelievable and terrible thing to me. At first, I will analyse why I cheated something from another person. And then, I will prepare some method that I am never cheated from swindler. And the person who cheated me, I should find him and I ask him to compensate about my mental and physical damage. Anyway, I believe that people should live honestly. People who pull a fast someone has to be punished about his action.

강사 첨삭

That makes a whole lot of sense!

I am happy that you live an honest life. Some people say that it can be tough but it is a matter of perspective.

Thanks for sharing, James!

I really thing I can ask you all sorts of questions because you are very open.

I hope your values will be passed on to more people, especially to your children.

I am deeply moved by every answer you share in your compositions.

Keep it up!

Have a wonderful day, James.

-Klein-

How do you feel about people pulling a fast one?
How do you deal with them?
 ==> 
If I am deceived something from someone, maybe I cannot endure it.
>>If I am deceived by something from someone, maybe I cannot endure it.

I believe that I lived honestly during my life.
>>Correct

So it is not unbelievable and terrible thing to me.
>>So it is not an unbelievable and terrible thing to me.

At first, I will analyse why I cheated something from another person.
>>At first, I will analyze why I was cheated by another person.

And then, I will prepare some method that I am never cheated from swindler.
>>And then, I will prepare some methods, so I will never be cheated by another swindler.

And the person who cheated me, I should find him and I ask him to compensate about my mental and physical damage.
>>Correct
Anyway, I believe that people should live honestly. 
>>Correct

People who pull a fast someone has to be punished about his action.

>>People who pull a fast one have to be punished for their action.

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