Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative Writing: Exercise: Answer/explain in not more than four (4) sentences.
"What would the trees say to humans (if they could talk)?"
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If the trees could talk, they would tell humans that don't cut them.
They would say that they would need water.
I want them to tell me that I could take a rest under them.
Have a good night~!!^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^_^)/
Happy Tuesday!
This is a very good composition.
It shows how you care about trees and the nature in general.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again.
See you later for another wonderful conversation!^-^
_T. Mayleen :)
If the trees could talk, they would tell humans that don\'t cut them.
>> ..they would tell humans not to cu them.
They would say that they would need water.
>> Correct!
OR: They would say that people would need water.
I want them to tell me that I could take a rest under them.
>> I would want them to tell me that I could take a rest under them.
Have a good night~!!^^
>> Correct!
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