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I think a well-paying job and a fulfilling job are both equally important.

Having a fulfilling job is great but if it doesn\'t pay well then it won\'t be enough to keep you from getting hungry.

I honestly think being hungry all the time is the worst feeling in the world and I truly mean it.

But if I were to choose between the two, I would probably choose a high paying job as well.

Anyhow, this is my perspective.

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~Teacher Charry

If I have to choose between the work that I find fulfilling and the work that pays well, I would choose the latter.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If I need to choose between the work that I find fulfilling and the work that pays well, I would choose the second one.

I heard that some people say doing what I want is the key factor to have a happy life.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I heard that some people say doing what I want is the key factor in having a happy life.

Of course I want to do something I like and enjoy my own progress.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Of course I want to do the things that want to do and enjoy my own progress.

To most of people, it\'s not easy to choose what to do without considering the amount of payment.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s not easy to most people to choose what to do without considering the amount of payment.

I can maintain my life one more day without feeling of fulfillment.

>> [Do you mean]: I can live within my means everyday without the feeling of fulfillment.

However I will face many practical problems if I don\'t have a job which can meet my daily expenses.

>> However, I will face many practical problems if I don\'t have a job which can meet my daily expenses.

Phrases like \'follow your dream and care your internal happiness when you decide where to work\' can be unrealistic to people who need to earn breads everyday.

>> Phrases like \'follow your dream and care your internal happiness when you decide where to work\' can be unrealistic to people who need to earn bread/money everyday.

I will consider how much I can find fulfilling from the work only when the payment is high enough for me to live.

>> I will consider doing fulfilling work only when the payment is high enough for me to live.

In other words, feeling of fulfillment is like a garnish but how much I can earn is main ingredients when I choose a job.

>> In other words, the feeling of fulfillment is like a garnish but how much I can earn is the main ingredient when I choose a job.