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2017-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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1. had, went 2. visit, made 3. didn't pass, have 4. had 5. don't carry 6. is on 7. have Teacher please give me a feedback with this^^ Bonus!! my thoughts with this article^^ The problems of the sunspot(AR2665)is like this. A sunspot is a cooler area in the sun. But now it is the approximate size with the earth. If this sunspot gets bigger and bigger, the sun could explode and the astroids could smash other planets and black holes and the milky ways and everything and the universe will dissipate. But all the creatures in the earth will dissipate when the hole gets 3 times or 4 times bigger than the earth. We eat animals, or plants, or insects. Plants can grow when there is water, sunlight, and soil. But without the sun plants can't grow and the animals that only eat plants will extinct and the animals that only eat meat will extinct because there's no food. Definetely, the insects will die. And humans will dissipate because there is also no food. So we have to stop this hole before it grows bigger and bigger.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji Su! ^^

Good afternoon ^^


Thank you for going over the activity, dear. :)

Well, I just hope that the sunspot will not get any bigger than what it is now.

Everything that is happening around us has effect on us one way or another.

I have corrections on your sentences but they are just minor. ;)

For the homework, I think I knight have not explained the instructions clearly but

anyhow, please go over the correct ones. :)


See you!

Teacher GLenda



1. had, went
2. visit, made
3. didn\'t pass, have
4. had
5. don\'t carry
6. is on
7. have



Use the verbs below in Simple present, Present continuous, Simple past or
Past continuous tense.


visit   try   book   enjoy   see
fascinate  take   build   travel   overlook


1. I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was traveling
through Bulgaria.

>> saw, was traveling
2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which 
was built
by the Romans in the sixth century.

>> visit, was built

3. Helen didn\'t enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying
to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.

>> didn\'t enjoy, were trying
4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I am booking a holiday in Virginia
with the travel agency at the moment.

>> am booking
5. I don\'t take so many clothes with me when I go for a short vacation because I
hate carrying around a lot of luggage.

>> don\'t take
6. Our hotel room was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of
the hotel from there.

>> was overlooking

7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors
from around the world.

>> fascinate



 Teacher please give me a feedback with this^^

Bonus!! my thoughts with this article^^
>> My thoughts on the article.

The problems of the sunspot(AR2665)is like this:

>> Correct

A sunspot is a cooler area in the sun. But now it is the approximate size with the earth.

>> A sunspot is a cooler area in the sun. But now it is the approximate size of the earth.


If this sunspot gets bigger and bigger, the sun could explode and the astroids could smash other planets and black holes and the milky ways and everything and the universe will dissipate.

>> If this sunspot gets bigger and bigger, the sun could explode and the astroids can smash the other planets, the black hole and the milky way and everything in the universe will dissipate.


But all the creatures in the earth will dissipate when the hole gets 3 times or 4 times bigger than the earth.

>> Correct


We eat animals, or plants, or insects.

>> Correct


Plants can grow when there is water, sunlight, and soil.

>>Correct


But without the sun plants can\'t grow and the animals that only eat plants will extinct and the animals that only eat meat will extinct because there\'s no food.

>> But without the sun plants can\'t grow and the animals that only eat plants will extinct and the animals that only eat meat will extinct because there\'s no food.


Definitely, the insects will die. And humans will dissipate because there is also no food.

>> Correct


So we have to stop this hole before it grows bigger and bigger.

>> Correct

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