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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Great afternoon! ^^
You will definitely improve! :)
As long as you take learning by heart and you have a goal
that always reminds you to keep learning. :)
Just take note of your mistakes and remember it so that you will
not have the same mistake over again. :)
You can do it! ^^
See you!
Teacher Glenda
Thanks for your advice I always read well the writing that you wrote these days I`m wondering whether my English is ever going to improve and whether it`s ever going to get easier
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Remember:
In writing, the words I, I\'m, I am will always be in capital letter. The word \'English\' is a proper noun as well, so it has to be in a capital letter.
1. I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was travelling through Bulgaria.
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2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which was bulit by the Romans in the sixth century.
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3. Helen didnt enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.
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4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I am booking a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment.
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5. I don`t take so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
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6. Our hotel room was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
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7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors from around the
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