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2017-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Thanks for your advice i always read well the writing that you wrote theseday i`m wondering whether my english is ever going to improve and whether it`s ever going to get easier 1. I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was travelling through Bulgaria. 2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which was bulit by the Romans in the sixth century. 3. Helen didnt enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying. 4. Be silent, please. I can't hear anything. I am booking a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment. 5. I don`t take so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage. 6. Our hotel room was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there. 7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors from around the

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Great afternoon! ^^


You will definitely improve! :)

As long as you take learning by heart and you have a goal

that always reminds you to keep learning. :)

Just take note of your mistakes and remember it so that you will

not have the same mistake over again. :)

You can do it! ^^


See you!

Teacher Glenda



Thanks for your advice I always read well the writing that you wrote these days I`m wondering whether my English is ever going to improve and whether it`s ever going to get easier 

>> Correct

Remember: 

In writing, the words I, I\'m, I am will always be in capital letter. The word \'English\' is a proper noun as well, so it has to be in a capital letter.


1. I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was travelling through Bulgaria.
>> Correct


2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which was bulit by the Romans in the sixth century.
>> Correct


 3. Helen didnt enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.
>> Correct


 4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I am booking a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment.
>> Correct


 5. I don`t take so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
>> Correct


 6. Our hotel room was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
>> Correct


 7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors from around the

>> Correct

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