Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing Exercise: One of the most common mental health problems is depression.
How can we help people who suffer from this? Kindly answer in not more than 5 sentences.
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We can help depressed people by telling them kind and comforting words.
In order to make them feel happy, we can hold many kinds of concerts.
We can do the things with them that they like.
Have a good night~!!^^
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for this composition.
I glad that you always find time to answer your homework.
Keep it up! I will see you then again tomorrow.
Good night!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
We can help depressed people by telling them kind and comforting words.
>> Correct!
OR: We can help depressed people by encouraging them.
In order to make them feel happy, we can hold many kinds of concerts.
>> Correct!
We can do the things with them that they like.
>> We can accompany them in doing the things that they like to do.
Have a good night~!!^^
>> Correct!
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