Homework

2017-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: What do you think is the most beautiful thing about the Earth? Kindly answer in not more than 5 sentences. ============================================================= I think nature is the most beautiful thing about the Earth. There are beautiful live things like plants, animals, and insects. Also, there are beautiful eternal things like the wind, sunlight, water, and earth. I want to keep them from harm. Have a good night~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!^-^

It\'s a happy Wednesday!


Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

You did a good job here!

I can\'t wait to talk to you again.

See you later in class! Enjoy the rest of the day!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I think nature is the most beautiful thing about the Earth.

>> Correct!


There are beautiful live things like plants, animals, and insects.

>> There are beautiful living things like plants, animals, and insects.


Also, there are beautiful eternal things like the wind, sunlight, water, and earth.

>> Also, we have the elements wind, sunlight, water, and earth.


I want to keep them from harm.
>> Correct!


Have a good night~!!^^

>> Correct!

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