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Hello there [이름]!

I heard that today is the hottest day in your country.

Please don\'t forget to drink lots of water. ^_^

Thank you for doing a beautiful essay for today.

I honestly think your examples are awesome.

I think it\'s just a matter of perspective. It entirely depends on how you look at things.

One could look at an obstacle and see it as a hindrance.

Another person could be looking at the same thing and see it as an opportunity.

I personally think that obstacles are opportunities wrapped in an ugly wrapper.

I know that there\'s something good inside it.

I just need to remove the ugly wrapper first. ^_^

Anyhow, that is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

Some obstacles can be turned into something beneficial especially in long term period.

>> Some obstacles can be turned into something beneficial especially in a/the long term period.

I want to explain two ways how some obstacles become positive factors.

>> I want to explain two ways on how some obstacles become positive factors.

First, external circumstances would be changed and the change turns previous negative obstacles into something good.

>> First, external circumstances would be changed and the change turns the previously negative obstacles into something good.

For example, if a person only had an old apartment and couldn\'t find any buyers, then the apartment could be an obstacle to the owner.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> For instance, if a person only had an old apartment and couldn\'t find any buyers, then the apartment could be a liability to the owner.

However, if a newly announced city planning wants to build a fancy new business park near the apartment, the price of the apartment would soar and owning the old apartment would turn into a good thing.

>> However, if a new announcement from the city government which states that a fancy new business park is going to be built near the apartment, the price of the apartment would soar and owning the old apartment would turn into a good thing.

Second, sometimes people can turn obstacles into positive factors by themselves without external helps.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Secondly, sometimes people have the ability to turn obstacles into positive factors by themselves without external factors.

For instance, a person who has a husky voice might fail to be a soprano.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> For example, a person who has a husky voice might fail to become a soprano.

If the person choose to be a rapper, the husky voice could be the person\'s unique feature.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If the person choose to be a rapper, his husky voice could be his unique feature.

As I wrote above, sometimes previous obstacles can be turned into unexpected luck or positive traits.

>> As I wrote above the examples above, I realized that sometimes previous obstacles can be turned into unexpected luck or positive traits.