Homework

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We are now in a digital world and everything is being done

with the help of technology. Books are now being forgotten and being

kept in libraries. But I hope both will move forward and hand in hand be developed

for the next generation. 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. :)

Please go over the minor corrections on your writing. :)

Teacher Glenda    

ESSAY:
In no less than 7 sentences, answer the following question:
Books and computers. Who will win in future? What do you prefer and why?

 What a good essay! as i see it both of them will develop in the future 

>> What a good essay topic! as I see it, both of them will be developed in the future. 
 They each have both merits and faults. but i think computers will win 

>> They each have both merits and faults but I think computers will win.
 Most of pelople are using the computer more than book 

>> Most pelople are using computer more than book.
There are so many information in computer that we can search something 

>> There are so many information in the computer that we can search.
 So that`s why i`m using the computer 

>>  So that`s why I`m using computer.
However there are the people who`s reading a book in the world and you can bulid extensive knowledge. 

>> However there are the people who`s reading a book in the world and you can bulid extensive knowledge. 

 so I don`t know who`s gonna win in the future

>> Correct