Homework

2017-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Choose a topic and discuss or describe it in not more than 5 sentences. 1. North Korea 2. Samsung 3. K-pop 4. Social Networking Site (SNS) 5. Seoul ================================================================= I come from Seoul that is the capital of Korea. There are many popular places such as Namsan Tower, Han river, Gwanghwamun Gate, and so on. Eat Galbi(charcoal grilled ribs), Naengmyeon(cold noodles) when you visit in Korea. They are so delicious and you can see many restaurants that sell them in Seoul. If you eat both of them together, they taste better. Have a good night~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^-^


Thank you so much for answering your homework.

It made me hungry.^^ (kidding)

You mentioned two Korean foods and I\'d really want to try these.

Hopefully, Korean restaurants here in my city serve those two.

I will see you again tomorrow. Good night too! :)


_T. Mayleen ^.-


I come from Seoul that is the capital of Korea.

>> I come from Seoul which is the capital city of South Korea.


There are many popular places such as Namsan Tower, Han river, Gwanghwamun Gate, and so on.

>> Correct!


Eat Galbi(charcoal grilled ribs), Naengmyeon(cold noodles) when you visit in Korea.

>> Eat Galbi(charcoal grilled ribs), Naengmyeon(cold noodles) when you visit Korea.

OR: Eat Galbi(charcoal grilled ribs), Naengmyeon(cold noodles) when you go to Korea.


They are so delicious and you can see many restaurants that sell them in Seoul.

>> Correct!


If you eat both of them together, they taste better.

>> If you them together, they\'ll taste better.


Have a good night~!!^^

>> Correct!

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