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2017-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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The essence of truth is one and only fact. Therefore if someone tells the truth, it doesn't have much possibilities interpreted in many ways. The reason why some people think that the truth can be changed by people's different views is the fact was already interpreted. If someone saw the fact and made a statement, the statement would be a mixture of the fact and the speaker's interpretation with high probability. For example, we can imagine the situation two people read a same result of current unemployment rate survey which shows the total rate was decreased but twenties' rate was increased. If one of them just graduated an university, that one might say unemployment is a social problem. If other person is not in twenties, that person might say the unemployment problem is getting better. Both people's statements can be true. If they only mentioned about the exact number, the result would be same. Pure numbers or indexes would not be changed by peoples' thoughts.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

It\'s finally Friday!!! kkk.

How\'s your day going so far?

Thank you very much for taking the time to answer our essay question.

I think the truth changes from one person to another depending on one\'s perspective or point-of-view.

For example, a person with a negative perspective would always look at failures as dead-ends.

On the other hand, a person with a positive perspective looks at failures as stepping stones.

They are both looking at the same thing but they have different interpretations.

Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you on Monday. ^_^

~Teacher Charry

The essence of truth is one and only fact.

>> The essence of truth is the only single fact.

Therefore if someone tells the truth, it doesn\'t have much possibilities interpreted in many ways.

>> Therefore if someone tells the truth, it doesn\'t have much possibilities that it would be interpreted in many ways.

The reason why some people think that the truth can be changed by people\'s different views is the fact was already interpreted.

>> The reason why some people think that the truth can be changed by people\'s different views is that, the fact was already interpreted.

If someone saw the fact and made a statement, the statement would be a mixture of the fact and the speaker\'s interpretation with high probability.

>> If someone saw the fact and made a statement, the statement would be a mixture of the fact and the speaker\'s interpretation with high accuracy.

For example, we can imagine the situation two people read a same result of current unemployment rate survey which shows the total rate was decreased but twenties\' rate was increased.

>> For example, we can imagine the situation of two people reading the same result of a current unemployment rate survey which shows that the total rate was decreased but for people in their twenties, the unemployment rate was increased.

If one of them just graduated an university, that one might say unemployment is a social problem.

>> If one of them just graduated from a university, that one might say unemployment is a social problem.

If other person is not in twenties, that person might say the unemployment problem is getting better.

>> If the other person is not in his/her twenties, that person might say the unemployment problem is getting better.

Both people\'s statements can be true.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Both of them could be right.

If they only mentioned about the exact number, the result would be same.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If only the exact number is mentioned then the result would be the same.

Pure numbers or indexes would not be changed by peoples\' thoughts.

>> Pure numbers or indexes could not be changed by peoples\' thoughts.

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