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2017-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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The most exciting experience I've ever had was when I bungee jumped from a tower next to a river. The most exciting part of bungee jumping was when I was jumping from the ground. I was scared when I was about to jump. It felt as though if I jump from the ground, I'll die right after it. And after I jump, I think 'it isn't so bad after all'. But when you are in the air, and just before you go down, well you feel like you made a decision and you can't turn back. It's sort of like you crossed a river you can't come back from. It is exciting because even though it's just a short moment, you can feel your feet dangling in the air.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You\'re such a brave girl! I envy those people who are brave enough to do bungee jumping.

In my case, I don\'t have the courage to do extreme sports. Tell me more about this experience in class.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


The most exciting experience I\'ve ever had was when I bungee jumped from a tower next to a river.

>>> Correct!

The most exciting part of bungee jumping was when I was jumping from the ground.

>>> Correct!

I was scared when I was about to jump.

>>> Correct!

It felt as though if I jump from the ground, I\'ll die right after it.

>>> It felt like if I jump from the ground, I\'ll die right after it.

And after I jump, I think \'it isn\'t so bad after all\'.

>>> After I jumped, I thought \"it isn\'t so bad after all.\"

But when you are in the air, and just before you go down, well you feel like you made a decision and you can\'t turn back.

>>> But when you are in the air and just before you go down, well you feel like you already made a decision and you can\'t turn back anymore.

It\'s sort of like you crossed a river you can\'t come back from.

>>> Correct!

It is exciting because even though it\'s just a short moment, you can feel your feet dangling in the air.

>>> It is exciting because even though it\'s just for short moment, you can feel your feet dangling in the air.

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