homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You\'re such a brave girl! I envy those people who are brave enough to do bungee jumping.
In my case, I don\'t have the courage to do extreme sports. Tell me more about this experience in class.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
The most exciting experience I\'ve ever had was when I bungee jumped from a tower next to a river.
>>> Correct!
The most exciting part of bungee jumping was when I was jumping from the ground.
>>> Correct!
I was scared when I was about to jump.
>>> Correct!
It felt as though if I jump from the ground, I\'ll die right after it.
>>> It felt like if I jump from the ground, I\'ll die right after it.
And after I jump, I think \'it isn\'t so bad after all\'.
>>> After I jumped, I thought \"it isn\'t so bad after all.\"
But when you are in the air, and just before you go down, well you feel like you made a decision and you can\'t turn back.
>>> But when you are in the air and just before you go down, well you feel like you already made a decision and you can\'t turn back anymore.
It\'s sort of like you crossed a river you can\'t come back from.
>>> Correct!
It is exciting because even though it\'s just a short moment, you can feel your feet dangling in the air.
>>> It is exciting because even though it\'s just for short moment, you can feel your feet dangling in the air.
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