Homework

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It\'s Monday again. How are you doing so far today?

Thank you very much for taking the time to answer our essay question.

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I think the main purpose of the media is to spread information.

However, it\'s sad to say that many people, especially the influential ones use it to manipulate the information handed over.

Maybe it\'s because of money or maybe it\'s because of power.

We don\'t know the real reason or purpose but I hope the media would be used for a better purpose.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

Stay happy and blessed.

~Teacher Charry :)

To most people, mass media affects a lot and makes what to think.

>> To most people, mass media affects them a lot and dictates them what to think.

In modern society, people are just exposed to a flow of information and sometimes don\'t actively choose or select information.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In the/our modern society, people are just exposed to a flow of information and sometimes don\'t actively choose or select information.

In that case, what mass media says limits the boundary of people\'s thought.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> For that instance, what mass media says limits the boundary of what people think.

For example, Korean mass media often shows how foreign workers commit crimes in Korea and they always mention workers\' nationalities or stay status.

>> For example, the Korean mass media often shows how foreign workers commit crimes in Korea and they always mention workers\' nationalities or working status.

As a result, many Koreans think foreign workers are dangerous or they are potential criminals.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Because of this, many Koreans think that foreign workers are dangerous or they are potential criminals.

However, mass media mentions less about how Korean employers exploit foreign workers illegally than foreign workers\' criminal rate.

>> However, mass media mentions lesser about how Korean employers exploit foreign workers illegally than foreign workers\' criminal rate.

It\'s not easy to expect people to search information by themselves.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s not easy to expect people to research for some information on their own.

Therefore people only care about foreign workers\' stay status and criminal records not about their horrible working conditions.

>> Therefore, people only care about foreign workers\' working status and criminal records and not about their horrible working conditions.

People usually stop actively searching information when they are overwhelmed by a lot of information so what mass media saying determines what people think.

>> People usually stop actively searching (for) information when they are overwhelmed by a lot of information so what mass media says determines what people think.