Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think stress is ever good, useful, or necessary?
I think stress is sometimes useful.
If we get proper stress for work, the stress gives us a little tension.
Thus we take the work serious and try to do the work hard.
But too much stress could ruin everything.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Grace!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I totally agree with what you said here.
Stress does pressure us to work harder and challenge ourselves.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I think stress is sometimes useful.
>> CORRECT!
If we get proper stress for work, the stress gives us a little tension.
>> If we get just the right amount of stress at work, it will give us a little pressure.
Thus we take the work serious and try to do the work hard.
>> Thus, we take our work seriously and try to work harder.
But too much stress could ruin everything.
>> CORRECT!
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