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2017-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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There's no TV show I don't really like. One reason is because I only turn on the TV when I have something fun to watch, so I don't know what TV shows are going on the rest of time. I guess I won't really like a TV show with K-pop singers. It's just that I don't prefer a certain kinds of music. And I guess I wouldn't like a TV show that teaches you about history or politics. It's another personal preference thing, but I personally don't like anything related to history and politics.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sending this in [이름]!

I hope you\'ll check the corrections I made below.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


There\'s no TV show I don\'t really like.

>>> Correct!

One reason is because I only turn on the TV when I have something fun to watch, so I don\'t know what TV shows are going on the rest of time.

>>> One reason is because I only turn on the TV when I have something fun to watch. So I don\'t know what TV shows are showing / airing.

I guess I won\'t really like a TV show with K-pop singers.

>>> Correct!

It\'s just that I don\'t prefer a certain kinds of music.

>>> It\'s just that I don\'t like a certain kind of music.

>>> OR: It\'s just that I prefer another kind of music.

And I guess I wouldn\'t like a TV show that teaches you about history or politics.

>>> Correct!

It\'s another personal preference thing, but I personally don\'t like anything related to history and politics.

>>> OR: Based on my personal preference, I don\'t like anything related to history and politics.

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