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2017-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you?? July is almost over ...August is coming soon I know time goes by fast. i didn`t do anyting sometimes i think what am i doing? in Australia and i suffer an identity crisis HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative writing: What is one thing that you want tell yourself right now. Why? [이름]! What are you doing? why don`t you push yourself? do what you planned last week why put off what you can do today? wake up !!! You should study english otherwise your english is getting down ! What will you do when you go back to korea ? Please think about everything Other personality inside me said like that So what? none of your business i`ll what i want ! please let me alone Other [이름] hahahaaha

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

a wonderful afternoon! ^^


Your only limitation is yourself.

You see, the way you think and feel about yourself, including your beliefs and expectations about what is possible for you, determines everything that happens to you. When you change the quality of your thinking, you change the quality of your life, sometimes instantly. Just as positive words can make someone smile or a well-timed humorous quote can make someone laugh, our thoughts react to the world in real-time.


You have complete control over only one thing in the universe -your thinking -and that’s where motivation come in! You can decide what you are going to think in any given situation. Your thoughts and feelings determine your actions and determine the results you get. It all starts with your thoughts.


Teacher Glenda




Hi how are you?? July is almost over ...August is coming soon
I know time goes by fast. i didn`t do anyting sometimes i think what am i doing? in Australia and i suffer an identity crisis

>> I know time goes by  so fast.  I don`t do anything and sometimes I think, what am I doing in Australia and I\'m suffering from identity crisis.


 HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative writing:
What is one thing that you want tell yourself right now. Why?

[이름]! What are you doing? why don`t you push yourself? do what you planned last week why put off what you can do today? wake up !!! 

>> Correct
 You should study english otherwise your english is getting down !

>> You should study English otherwise your English will not improve !
 What will you do when you go back to Korea ? Please think about everything 

>> Correct
 Other personality inside me said like that 

>> Other personality inside me said things like this:
So what? none of your business i`ll what i want ! please let me alone
Other [이름] hahahaaha

>> So what? It\'s none of your business. I`ll do what  I want ! please let me alone!

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