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Before starting travel, I have to plan a schedule. A considering list will be like this: where the sites are, which date should I take, where do I sleep, what should I take a ride or other things. If I consider these alone, I can choose freely what I want. And if I want to change the schedule while I'm traveling, I can change it freely.
If I go travel with a group, planning the schedule can be a hardship. But still there are many benefits. First, we can protect each other from a danger. Second, I can share my thoughts which are made by the travel with my friends, and I can also listen the other's thoughts.
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Hey there pretty lady!
You are right! Traveling alone or with a group both have advantages and disadvantages. Either you go traveling alone or with a friend, I hope you can to that before the summer season ends. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Before starting travel, I have to plan a schedule.
>> Before starting to travel, I have to plan a schedule.
OR>> Before going on a trip, I have to make a schedule.
A considering list will be like this: where the sites are, which date should I take, where do I sleep, what should I take a ride or other things.
>> I have to consider the following on my list: where the sites are, which date should I take, where do I sleep, what should I ride and other things.
If I consider these alone, I can choose freely what I want.
>> correct!
And if I want to change the schedule while I\'m traveling, I can change it freely.
>> correct!
If I go travel with a group, planning the schedule can be a hardship. But still there are many benefits.
>> If I travel with a group, planning the schedule can be very hard. But still there are many benefits.
First, we can protect each other from a danger.
>> First, we can protect each other from danger.
Second, I can share my thoughts which are made by the travel with my friends, and I can also listen the other\'s thoughts.
>> Second, I can share my thoughts to my friends, and I can also listen their thoughts/ideas.
You are right! Traveling alone or with a group both have advantages and disadvantages. Either you go traveling alone or with a friend, I hope you can to that before the summer season ends. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Before starting travel, I have to plan a schedule.
>> Before starting to travel, I have to plan a schedule.
OR>> Before going on a trip, I have to make a schedule.
A considering list will be like this: where the sites are, which date should I take, where do I sleep, what should I take a ride or other things.
>> I have to consider the following on my list: where the sites are, which date should I take, where do I sleep, what should I ride and other things.
If I consider these alone, I can choose freely what I want.
>> correct!
And if I want to change the schedule while I\'m traveling, I can change it freely.
>> correct!
If I go travel with a group, planning the schedule can be a hardship. But still there are many benefits.
>> If I travel with a group, planning the schedule can be very hard. But still there are many benefits.
First, we can protect each other from a danger.
>> First, we can protect each other from danger.
Second, I can share my thoughts which are made by the travel with my friends, and I can also listen the other\'s thoughts.
>> Second, I can share my thoughts to my friends, and I can also listen their thoughts/ideas.
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