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2017-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Answer each question in not more than 2 sentences.^-^ --------------------------------------------------------------------1. If you were a rich man, where would you go for the next holiday? -> If I were a rich girl, I would go abroad for the next holiday. So I would eat many kinds of delicious food and I would go to many famous places. -------------------------------------------------------------------- 2. If you could be a plant, what plant would you choose to be? -> If I could be a plant, I would be a pine tree. It's because it is green all year round. --------------------------------------------------------------------3. 3.If you could be another man or woman for a day, who would you choose? -> If I could be another man or woman for a day, I would be a president of my father's company. So I would give a day off to my father.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^-^

Happy Tuesday!


Thank you so much for answering your homework.

You gave good sentences.

I enjoyed reading this composition.

I will see you again tomorrow. Have a good night!


_T. Mayleen :)


Writing Exercise: Answer each question in not more than 2 sentences.^-^
--------------------------------------------------------------------1. If you were a rich man, where would you go for the next holiday?
-> If I were a rich girl, I would go abroad for the next holiday.

>> CORRECT!


So I would eat many kinds of delicious food and I would go to many famous places.

>> CORRECT!
 -------------------------------------------------------------------- 


 2. If you could be a plant, what plant would you choose to be?
-> If I could be a plant, I would be a pine tree.

>> CORRECT!


It\'s because it is green all year round.

>> CORRECT!


 --------------------------------------------------------------------3. 3.If you could be another man or woman for a day, who would you choose?
-> If I could be another man or woman for a day, I would be a president of my father\'s company.

>> I would be the president of my father\'s company.


So I would give a day off to my father.

>> CORRECT!

OR: I would give my father a day off. 

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