homework
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Writing Exercise: One of the most common mental health problems is depression.
How can we help people who suffer from this? Kindly answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^
We can give attention to people who have depression.
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We can give attention to people who have depression.
>> CORRECT!
OR: We can pay attention to those who are suffering from depression.
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