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HELLO MR. [이름],

Thank you for telling me your opinion about animals kept in cages.

Anyway, have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

I think it is fair to keep animals in the zoo in cages as long as the cages are big enough for their activities.

>> I think it is fair to keep animals in the zoo or in big cages if there are enough space for do their activities.
 If the raisers don\'t abuse the animals in the zoo, the animals\'lives in the zoo can not be so miserable.

>> If the animal keepers won\'t abuse the animals in the zoo, their lives won\'t be miserable.
 Some people gladly sacrifice themselves for others, such as their family, their country, their people, etc.

>> Some people sacrifices their lives for others such as their family, their fellow countrymen, friends etc.
 Animals in the zoo may be sacrificing their wild nature for human beings, especially for children through their appearance.

>> On the other hand, animals in the zoo are sacrificing their wild life for humans.
 That is why I don\'t think it is unfair to keep them in cages.

>> CORRECT
 They may obtain a certain amount of compensation for their sacrifice even though they don\'t acknowledge it.

>> They have the right to be compensated on the sacrifices that they have done.
 The compensation includes feeding them, protecting them, letting breed them, and so on. 

>> CORRECT
 The Bible says, \"Rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air and over every living creature that moves on the ground.\"

>> CORRECT
 It is good for us to treat animals properly, but it is not acceptable for some people to treat them as if they are just like human beings.

>> CORRECT