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2017-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What should be pointed out in any conversation? Provide situations on how it is done well. ===> In my case, I order something many times to my team members. At that time I try to explain in detail why they have to do that work. If they don't understand what I say, I worry about that the result of the work what they finished is not satisfing me. So I want to concensus about their work and what is my expectation. When I talk with my colleague, I sometimes point out the way of working when they work. Anyway I expect that my colleague will be expert in their job.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, James!

I feel that you can also be very strict. There is a part of you, which I may say is a little perfectionist. It\'s not a bad thing at all! In fact, it is very good for me.

As long as it is not harming anyone, carry on with it.

May you soon reap the fruits of your hard work!

All the best!

-Klein-

What should be pointed out in any conversation?
Provide situations on how it is done well.
===>
 In my case, I order something many times to my team members.

>>Correct
 At that time I try to explain in detail why they have to do that work.

>>Correct
 If they don\'t understand what I say, I worry about that the result of the work what they finished is not satisfing me. 

>>If they don\'t understand what I say, I worry the result is not satisfying for me.
 So I want to concensus about their work and what is my expectation.

>>So I want a consensus between their work and my expectation.
 When I talk with my colleague, I sometimes point out the way of working when they work.

>>When I talk with my colleague/s, I sometimes point out the way to work on it.
 Anyway I expect that my colleague will be expert in their job.

>>Anyway, I expect my colleagues will be experts in their job/field.

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