Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thanks for writing a beautiful essay again.
I find it beautiful because it\'s so full of honesty.
You\'re correct when you said we can still learn from other people\'s mistakes.
Actually, I think we learn more from mistakes rather than stories of success.
Mistakes teach us deeper lessons because they hurt.
The ability to share our mistakes to others is not easy but it could be very helpful depending on how others see it.
Like what you said earlier, a mountain\'s ugly stone cannot be viewing platform but you can use it as a whetstone to sharpen your sword.
In the end, it\'s still all about perspective.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
Take care.
~Teacher Charry :)
There is a four-character Chinese idiom saying other mountain\'s useless stone can be benefit to me.
>> There is a four-character Chinese idiom saying other mountain\'s useless stone can be a benefit to me.
The literal translation is that other mountain\'s ugly stone can\'t be a viewing stone but I can still use it as a whetstone.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The literal translation of it is that other mountain\'s ugly stone can\'t be a viewing stone but I can still use it as a whetstone.
The real meaning of the idiom is that I can learn from other people\'s small fault or flaws.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The real meaning of the idiom is that there is still something to learn from other people\'s small fault or flaws.
In general, people can learn not only from good tings but also flaws or faults from others.
>> In general, people can learn not only from good tings but also from the flaws or faults of others.
In other words, a person who can give me a lesson by his/her flaws or mistakes doesn\'t have to be the one I admire and respect.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In short, a person who can give me a lesson through his/her flaws or mistakes doesn\'t necessarily have to be the one I admire and respect.
Although if I admired the person who shows me flaws, the lesson I\'ve got would be quite effective.
>> Although if I admired the person who shows me flaws, the lesson I\'ve gotten would be quite effective.
Honestly, I would be little bit disappointed on the person because I admire and respect him/her.
>> Honestly, I would be little disappointed on the person because I admire and respect him/her.
OR >> Honestly, I would be bit disappointed on the person because I admire and respect him/her.
However I know that every people have their own flaws including myself.
>> However I know that every person have their own flaws including myself.
Therefore I will restore my admiration and respect if the person shows me how he/she can handle the problems well.
>> Therefore, I will restore my admiration and respect if the person shows me how he/she can handle the problems well.
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