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2017-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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If i could own any car, Iwould pick a car which can move both on the land and on the river or sea. Usually i'll drive the car on the land, sometimes i'll drive it on the water like a boat. it would be so wonderful if the car could be boat. then i could use it like a yacht. i go to the sea or river by driving the car and fish on the car like a yacht. Also i could see a beautiful sunset on the sea.

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Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! I hope you won\'t be too tired in cleaning the room today. Good luck!

T. JanE ^^

If I could own any car, I would pick a car which can move both on the land and on the river or sea.

>> Correct

Usually I\'ll drive the car on the land, sometimes I\'ll drive it on the water like a boat.

>> Correct

it would be so wonderful if the car could be boat.

>> It would be so wonderful if the car could be a boat.

Then I could use it like a yacht.

>> Correct

i go to the sea or river by driving the car and fish on the car like a yacht.

>> I would go to the sea or river by driving the car, and fish on the car like a yacht.

Also i could see a beautiful sunset on the sea.

>> Also, I could see the beautiful sunset on the sea.

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